General Comments

The authors present an overview of the methods employed to measure snow depth from UAVs using Structure from Motion (SfM) techniques over a sub-arctic environment. Notably, they present comparisons between several different UAV platforms in terms of both general platform limitations and with respect to measured vs. observed snow depths. Such comparisons are also partitioned by date and land cover across three separate plots.

In my opinion, the paper is well-written and presents results clearly and concisely through the effective use of tables and figures. The methods are well presented to allow repeatability and the various platforms are well described and compared. I think the work's major novelty lies in the inter-comparison of several platforms, and different baselines, as well as a large range of dates, land cover, and illumination conditions. Bringing all of these components together is challenging, but I think it is done well and presented in a way that will allow others to design and implement effective SfM snow depth mapping projects in similar regions.

With that said, I believe there are a few areas that could be improved. This refers to a need for a heightened emphasis on recommendations especially pertaining to the use of multiple baselines. A clear section or figure aggregating the recommendations from throughout the work would greatly benefit the paper. Without the focus on best practices, this work essentially presents a workflow that has already been established to some degree in the literature. More specific suggestions along these lines are presented below.

Major Suggestions

Provide more emphasis on recommendations. This could be in the form of a table or a new figure within the discussion section.  Such recommendations that are mentioned in the text include: the best platform for accuracy/ease of use (RTK vs. GCPs), general recommendations on GCP use, environmental operating suggestions (cold temps and wind), appropriate baselines, and operations in low light conditions. Currently, this information is largely spread throughout the text.

The use of different baselines in this work and pros/cons should be highlighted more. I believe more focus should be placed on the tradeoffs between using the ALS and UAV-based baselines as well as recommending best practices. There is novelty and value to adding an increased focus on these particular findings. For example, based on the results, it seems to me that (if possible) establishing a LiDAR-based baseline might be a good standard practice before doing SfM work.

The lighting conditions aspect was stated as one of the primary objectives of this study, though I feel it wasn’t sufficiently focused on/addressed – It seemed to be shown that low light didn’t notably affect the retrievals, but this is in contrast to previous literature. The discussion on this topic seemed to be a bit of an afterthought. Other points may be considered to be emphasized instead (like the choice of baselines or the performance across multiple platforms).

Minor/Technical Suggestions

L15: revise - “…and the UAV snow depth results compared to in situ measurements.”

L24 - L31: Try to separate the sentences on societal impacts & ecological/environmental implications. Reads as though it could be plant/animal communities OR human communities. Also, generally, can add a bit more detail here on the importance of snow before moving on to monitoring approaches. Especially, how snow relates to nature/the environment.

L45 - L52: Either provide a bit more of an overview on the range of what was done in these studies or point the reader to the latter discussion section where you detail these studies more.

L59: ‘submitted to the same journal’ can be removed

L59 - L60: consider rewording, the data itself shouldn’t have implications; are you referring to the insights it provides, regarding accumulation and melt patterns?

L159: The tree masking is an interesting approach. I suggest adding an additional sentence or two describing the ‘Maximum Likelihood Supervised Classification’. Additionally, assuming there is a related citation/paper to this approach, that should be included here.

Figure 2 (and throughout): The use of the term DEMs of Difference (DoD) is used throughout. I suggest adding the acronym in the figure

L174: Related to the previous point, make sure that the difference (or not) in meaning between DoD and snow depth is clear (and why DoD is used instead of snow depth). Are these terms interchangeable?

L215: Provide citation/source for “Levene’s test”

L225: ‘struggles’ -> ‘performs poorly’ (or similar)

L240: are these biases high or low? It may also be valuable to add a table with information of the bias/errors of all the baselines used (maybe in supplementary material)

Figure 1: If you are going to present the point snow depth observation from the ultrasonic sensor (in Figure 7), make sure to indicate its location in Figure 1

L294: ‘No clear correlation’ -> can you describe this a bit more? It is concerning if the observed and UAV-derived depths are not correlated across all depth products. That draws into question the ability of these approaches to accurately capture the snow variability across the basin, and only suggests it can capture general differences through time. Please add some more interpretation here.

Figure 9: In the results, can you add a comment on the clear high (Dec 12) and low biases (Apr 3)?

L401 – 404: This is a good opportunity to delve into why you think the lowlight conditions did not affect the products notably (and why it did in Revuelto et al 2021). The stated objective of providing an assessment of how low light conditions affect SfM snow depth mapping is left with a somewhat ambiguous conclusion. Make sure this is clear.

L470: Reword – I think a general statement mentioning how weather constraints and unpredictability are unavoidable limitations when working with UAVs + providing your example.

Conclusion: One recommendation - specifically recommend a platform (i..e, the Phantom 4 RTK) for providing the best SfM products (w/ relevant error statistics)

General Comments

This manuscript presents the retrieval of snow depth using several UAS platform designs with variable optical sensor setups over three landcover types, to test the efficacy of snow depth retrieval in harsh arctic environments. The experiment is exhaustively described and well documented, with very articulate description of the drone setup, the weather during flights, and set up of the ground control points vs RTK positioning. The major result of the paper that is echoed by the community of UAV snow depth retrievals is that with increasing complexity in the canopy, the reduction of accuracy of the retrieved snow depth. However, the authors also present that whether GCPs are included in the scene or RTK positioning correction Is used that the different in error is negligible.

Overall the paper is very well written and I believe will be ready for publication with minor revision. There are some improvements that can be made with respect to the presentation of results, especially when having the capability to compare individual measurements to their associated snow depth retrieval. In the results section box plots are used to compare UAV-derived snow depths to the DoDs and snow line measurements. There is a place for including the box plot as it does present the distribution of the data, however it is difficult to ascertain where the most disagreement is occurring in the retrievals. I would expect to see a 1:1 scatterplot that compares the UAV-derived snow depths to in-situ observations. That would allow the reader to understand where the highest deviations are occurring. Are they occurring in areas of thin snowpack, or deep snow? I would also recommend showing the deviations on the map – are they locally clustered? Or homogeneously distributed about the map?

The Discussion section was well written, however quite long. Section 4.2, specifically lines 434 to 470 read more like a review of issues to consider when doing topographic or snow mapping with UAVs, discussion lens focal length, light conditions, horizontal/vertical accuracy, battery life, etc. I would recommend either shortening or removing this section for clarify of the results. However, lines 471 to 499 are relevant to the research being conducted in this manuscript, so I would suggest keeping it.

Specific Comments:

Page 2 Line 30: “snowlines” I see this more commonly referred to as snow transects in snow literature. I’m not sure if this is something that requires changing.

Page 2 Line 36: “Homgren” Should be Holmgren.

Page 2 Lines 45 – 49: There have also been some UAS work on freshwater lake ice to retrieve snow depth from structure from motion (Gunn et al., 2022), which could also be included in your description of UAS work in arctic conditions on line 54.

Gunn, G. E., Jones, B. M., & Rangel, R. C. (2021). Unpiloted aerial vehicle retrieval of snow depth over freshwater lake ice using structure from motion. Frontiers in Remote Sensing, 2, 675846.

Page 3 Line 77: “mire” This is the first time you refer to “mire” areas. What are mire areas (aka bogs, wetland).

Page 6 Line 146: “placed an average of 52 meters apart” – One thing to keep in mind is that the stakes are placed quite far apart – how do you validate the spatial heterogeneity of snow depth when the spatial autocorrelation is typically around 50 meters? Or is that the reason that you’re choosing 50m as an average distance apart.