General

The study compares simulated snow parameters using SVS2-Crocus to in situ measurements at a study area in the NWT, Canada. Two versions of the model are applied; the default model and an Arctic-specific modification. Several locations with differing vegetation and snow conditions are analyzed. Furthermore, a forward model is used to simulate microwave backscatter from SVS2-Crocus outputs, comparing these to backscatter simulations using the in situ data directly. A microwave-effective snowpack concept, which aggregates the data to three representative layers, is used. The paper is of interest to the scientific community as it has become clear that some type of fusion of modelled and remote sensing information is required for successful retrieval of SWE from spaceborne radar. This concerns, in particular, approaches using Ku-band SAR backscatter. This paper takes some steps to attempt to quantify how an advanced coupled land-surface -snow process model reproduces natural snowpacks in a challenging environment, and what are the implications on (simulated) backscatter. As such, the study is worthy to consider for publication.

The study is also generally well written although some specifics in the methodology are hard to grasp and require several readings. For example, from the abstract it was not at first obvious that actual observations of backscatter are not used, only simulations. Furthermore, it is hard to discern where exactly the three layer aggregates (radar equivalent snowpack) where used: in simulations based on SVS2-Crocus, in simulations from snowpit data, or perhaps both? Terminology referring to the sites also changes occasionally, sometimes referring to the biome (tundra, forest), sometimes to the names defined in Figure 1. These are the main examples, but the complexity of the diverse model settings makes the paper somewhat hard to follow and requires particular care in describing the experimental setups.

My main concern, however, is related to the usefulness of the backscatter simulation setup itself. The SMRT model is treated as a black box, testing which kind of numbers come out with each version of the input data. It seems that the pit data forcing is used as the “truth”, with SVS2-Crocus -based simulations representing deviations (“errors”) from this. No real effort is placed on which parameters actually induce these differences, beyond testing different approaches for tuning the optical grain size/SSA. Since the study is based on only simulated backscatter, one could expect a thorough sensitivity study on different parameters, or something similar. Perhaps using the 120 ensemble members in SVS2-Crocus makes this a challenge; however, you could then consider dropping the ensemble approach, and use individual, controlled simulations?

Further, some confusion is created by first choosing to fix a scaling parameter in the forward model (the polydispersity factor K) at unity, only to re-introduce another scaling parameter with basically the same end result, as adjusting K would have had. I realized only after some time that the idea is to try to scale the SVS2-Crocus SSA to observations; however, the choice of the scaling factors tested seems arbitrary. Of some interest could be to try to derive your own optimal scaling for 1) SSA 2) density 3) possibly another parameter, such as snow depth, and with the (average) optical scaling reconduct the simulation exercise.

Please see major comments below for specifics.

Major comments

1. Abstract: by reading only the abstract, it is not fully clear that you do not actually use observations of backscatter: “Modelled backscatter…were compared to backscatter using…” please make it more explicit from the start that this is a simulation exercise.
2. Abstract, line 25: “leading to high errors…” this is misleading again, as an “error” in simulated backscatter implies you have measured the actual one. Rather, this is a root-mean-square difference between two simulations with different model forcing. I would suggest to change the terminology throughout the manuscript, also changing RMSE(rror) to RMSD(eviation)
3. Introduction: this section is very nicely written
4. …except that in the last sentence, you should already make clear which (Crocus outputs, field data, or both) are converted from multi-layer to the radar-equivalent 3-layer setup. Now this is not clear at all.
5. Figure 1 is very good and informative. However, can you add a scale for the snow depths? I guess the average snow depth can be indicated just as easily as the relative depth?

Throughout the paper, please choose which name you use when referring to sites. Now, sometimes “forested sites” and “tundra” are used, sometimes “Havikpak” etc. You could also use always both to be explicit e.g. “Upper plateau (tundra)”

1. p9, eqs 1 and 2 and associated text. As pointed out in the above, it is unclear from the text why the K parameter is fixed here, while later on you choose to scale the SSA. I realize this is due to the experimental setup of comparing “simulations vs. simulations” , and this should be clearly mentioned. You should display the scaling factor you use in eq. 2 (and maybe forget about K, since essentially you do not use it).

I also fail to see why the scaling factor of 0.63 derived in a paper from 2011 could be relevant. I would suggest another approach: 1) derive your optimal scaling factors required to match SVS2-Crocus to field data 2) do this at least for SSA, density and snow depth 3) analyze which is the most important factor to scale (which has the largest impact) for each surface type. As an optimal case, you could test scaling all three+ parameters to match the field data, and see how much RMSD remains from variability in the ensembles.

Again, it is not clear to which data the n-layer -> 3-layer conversion is applied. Apparently to SVS2-Crocus at least, but is it applied to field data as well? Or are filed data always simulated “as is”?

Whole section 4.0 on results. It is quite tedious to read endless RMSE values in the text, and the point is quickly lost. This really gets out of hand e.g. on p. 16. Please tabulate the results, refer in the text to the tables, highlighting only the most important results.

1. Figure 4: you could comment in the text that the variability of Arctic SVS2-Crocus snow depth is much reduced compared to the Default run for most sites. Why is this?

It is also not clear against which SD data the RMSEs are calculated against. Magnaprobe, pit, or both?

Same question as above for SWE. are the RMSEs against Pit or SWE Tube values?

For density, can you not calculate a reference value from SWE tubes? Do you have the snow depth from the SWE core site recorded?

1. Figure 8. The text refers to SSA, but optical grain diameter is shown. Please use one or the other.

1. Figure 9: the figure sort of captures why applying just a random scaling factor does not tell us much. Please consider, as suggested, making equivalent scatter plots by optimally scaling different variables. This will tell you at least which parameters carry the most weight, possibly informing where future modeling efforts should focus on.

1. p19, lines 377-380. The two methods are already described in the Methods section, not necessary to repeat here. As indicted before, I do disagree with the usefulness of the methods.

1. p19 line 385 “simulation of weaker backscatter that is more representative of measurements” Which measurements? This again seems to refer to measurements of backscatter.

1. p19 line 394. “A radar equivalent snowpack…” reading between the lines, I realized from this sentence that the pit data were used “as is” and the radar-equivalent approach was not applied to them. However, taken out of the context of the rest of the paper, this sentence again seems to imply that you had some backscatter measurements to compare with (“…replicate the scattering behaviour of the multi-layered snowpack”). It should be made clear throughout that you are comparing simulations with other simulations.

1. p19 line 398 “vertically averaged scaling factor” What is this?

Minor comments

1. P8, line 194. Please clarify how exactly the division into WS and DHS was made (values).
2. Figure 7: please switch the order of Arctic and Default in the panels. Logically, since default is the starting point, it should be displayed on the right (also to match Figure 4). explain acronyms WS and DHS also in the figure caption.
3. p20 line 406-407 “to assess the reliability of Ku-band backscatter SWE retrievals”. This statement may be the underlying reason of the study, but you do not really go into retrieval so it is also misleading. Please reword, e.g. “assess the reliability of forward model simulations driven by SVS2-Crocus, a crucial factor considering inversion of SWE from backscatter observations” or something similar.
4. p23 line 505 large grains result in increasing exponential correlation length, not the opposite.

This manuscript presents a comprehensive assessment of Arctic-modified SVS2-Crocus snow model performance across the forest-tundra ecotone and its implications for microwave remote sensing applications. Although the work addresses important questions regarding snow model transferability and microwave retrieval preparation, several methodological and interpretational concerns limit its impact.

Major comments:

1. The meteorological forcing data are from HRDPS, which is distributed in space with 25 km spatial resolution. You simulated snow cover based on a point scale, then you validated the simulated results using ground observations. I am confused about how the 2.5 km HRDPS data is applied to the model (point extraction vs. spatial interpolation) and whether simulations are run as single points or on a spatial grid. Did you downscale the forcing data before inputting them into the snow model? The spatial resolution of 25 km is too coarse, and it’s hard to validate simulated snow cover from HRDPS using point-based ground observations, especially in the complex terrain. That’s also one of the reasons for the uncertainties of simulation associated with wind speed within the HRDPS. Therefore, it could be more reasonable and decrease uncertainties to downscale the forcing data first if you did not do that.
2. It is not clear how the 120 ensemble members are statistically processed. When reporting metrics like "default RMSE and Arctic RMSE" (Lines 288-291), it is unclear whether these represent ensemble mean performance, median values, or some other aggregation method.
3. The MS repeatedly claims that improved backscatter simulation will advance SWE retrieval capabilities, but this logic is confused. If SVS2-Crocus provides snow density and depth, SWE calculation is trivial and does not require backscatter simulation. The authors have not explained clearly why simulating backscatter (forward modeling) helps retrieve SWE from measured backscatter (inverse problem). The MS discovers substantial backscatter simulation errors (Lines 364-372) that would severely compromise any retrieval algorithm. The authors resort to ad hoc corrections (minimum SSA values, scaling factors) that lack physical justification and would not be transferable to operational scenarios and more study regions. In other words, the MS combines snow model evaluation with microwave retrieval algorithm development without clearly articulating which problem it aims to solve. If the goal is snow model improvement, the microwave component adds unnecessary complexity. If the final goal is advancing SWE retrieval, the methodology does not address the fundamental challenges of operational retrieval algorithms. Therefore, please clarify the study aims or objectives specifically.

Minor comments:

Lines 107-108, regarding the two forest sites, can you give a more detailed description of their location? They are under the canopy or canopy gaps?

Lines 157-158, how and when (summer or winter) did you measure the polar vegetation heights? These heights (0.1-0.35 m) seem static, but shrub bending under snow load is dynamic. Did you consider that?

Lines 177-178, you mentioned the range of polar vegetation height (0.1-0.35 m) before. When you used polar vegetation height in Arctic SVS2-Crocus parameterization, did you use a fixed value or changing values? It’s so simple to create a binary threshold at all sites (tundra, shrub, and forest): below this height = vegetation effects active, above = normal snow physics, especially several vegetation types in your study region. For example, why would 0.35 m shrub effects apply in 10 m tall forests?

Line 238, I know “TVC” represents Trail Valley Creek, but this is the first time you've used the abbreviation. You should also indicate its full name; similar problems also exist for other sites. In addition, I'm confused about how you named the seven sites. Either all of them are named after places, or all of them are named after vegetation types.

Figs. 5 and 6, It could be better to show different pit measurements in the legend.

Lines 459-461, "some simulated profiles can be shallower than measured profiles as a function of the precipitation inputs meaning some polar vegetation heights encompass much of the simulated profile", is the snow thermal conductivity changes influenced by shrub considered during the parameterization processes? Except for the decreased wind-induced snow compaction, the changes in snow thermal conductivity are also important to snow energy and mass balance as well as soil thermal regime.

The Hedstrom and Pomeroy (1998) interception model requires some vegetation information, such as LAI and canopy coverage. Where did you get them?