Articles | Volume 18, issue 3
https://doi.org/10.5194/tc-18-1467-2024
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Subglacial valleys preserved in the highlands of south and east Greenland record restricted ice extent during past warmer climates
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2023-2502', Anonymous Referee #1, 20 Nov 2023
- AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Guy Paxman, 08 Feb 2024
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2023-2502', Henry Patton, 15 Jan 2024
- AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Guy Paxman, 08 Feb 2024
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ED: Publish subject to minor revisions (review by editor) (09 Feb 2024) by Neil Glasser
AR by Guy Paxman on behalf of the Authors (12 Feb 2024)
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ED: Publish as is (13 Feb 2024) by Neil Glasser
AR by Guy Paxman on behalf of the Authors (19 Feb 2024)
This study aims to reconstruct the broad climatic -- ice-sheet conditions which enabled the development (and then preservation) of subglacial landscapes along the south-eastern margins of the present-day Greenland Ice Sheet. The study has two primary foci: first, the identification and mapping of 'relict' subglacial valleys using a combination of optical remote sensing and airborne ground penetrating radar, then second, using the configuration of these valleys to explore through ice sheet modelling how they have been formed and preserved - and to explore constraints on the timing of these processes. In doing so, the authors conclude that these features were formed when the ice sheet had a configuration restricted to only a few percent of its contemporary size and was geographically restricted to the mountainous south-eastern area. They conclude that the features were formed around sometime in the range 2.6-7 Ma, so likely well before the onset of Quaternary glaciation.
My research experience primarily concerns contemporary Greenland surface processes and ice dynamics by fieldwork and remote sensing. I am not active in paleo-glaciology nor in ice-sheet-wide simulations, so I write this review from a more 'generalist' perspective. I want to stress that I welcome rebuttals if the authors feel I've misunderstood their point(s).
Overall I find the manuscript to be in excellent shape. The title is suitable and the paper addresses relevant scientific questions, particularly for this special issue. Substantial contributions on the timing of previous ice sheet extent are reached. The Methods are well described and extensive. I believe that the key areas of potential sensitivity in the modelling have been investigated. I find the results sufficient to support the interpretation. The paper is well-written and overall easy to follow. The figures are of good quality. It was a fascinating read!
I have some specific minor comments as follows:
L119: The authors state that MODIS MoG imagery records the intensity of the reflection of a satellite-emitted radar signal. This is untrue. MODIS is a passive sensor which records visible/near-visible solar radiation reflections.
L125: 'Conversely' is confusing here. Both the preceding sentence and this one focus on shortcomings of the MoG approach, whereas conversely would suggest that we're about to be told something about what it is good for. 'Furthermore' instead?
L136: Please add a further reference that cites the OIB project.
L139-140: Either expand this methods explanation or remove incompletely - there isn't enough information to judge whether the fact that an ML approach was used is important to the present study or not. If it is, expand why, otherwise I suggest removing this methodological detail.
L277: add a reference to Fig. 4g for concerning the thermal state analysis.
L279: (subjective) - I suggest starting a new paragraph here for clarity
L332: is 'mapped mountain valley networks' missing the term 'glacial'? (to distinguish from fluvial)
L480: The first part of this sentence is really the conclusion of the previous paragraph, so perhaps would be better off added there. Then the paragraphs will match points (a) and (b) introduced in L466-469.
L494: would 'also' result in higher rates of mass accumulation and turnover 'there', or similar (i.e. is the intended meaning that the conditions which enable higher rates of mass accumulation in turnover in the EH also cause the ~same conditions in the SH?)
L572-580: I struggled to understand this paragraph. This might be my shortcomings in being able to 'imagine' isostacy, but I think nonetheless that some rephrasing would be beneficial.