Thank you very much for your constructive comment. Please find our responses and suggestions below.

The borehole was drilled in autumn and moisture had already frozen back within the active layer. We will add ‘approximately 10%’, as the volumetric ice volume in the active layer can vary from winter to winter.

With kind regards,

Lars Widmer, Marcia Phillips and Chasper Buchli

Thank you very much for your constructive comment. Please find our responses and suggestions below.

"The measurement frequency and parameters of the smoothing windows are stated. There is no mention of whether each measurement (every 30 minutes) is a single read from the ADC, or if each measurement is the result of an averaging over several reads. This type of averaging is fairly standard to implement to decrease electronic noise, but since noise is a focus in the paper it could be useful to state this for both measurement systems."

A single temperature measurement is carried out every 30 minutes and the data averaged and stored every 2 hours. The borehole instrumentation was originally designed for long-term permafrost temperature monitoring (with two measurement systems to ensure long-term continuity). We later saw that a comparison of the data obtained using the two systems would be interesting. If we had planned this comparison from the start, we would have measured and stored the data every 30 minutes.

"On line 69 you mention a discrepancy in the measurement values from Jan22 to Aug22. From Fig 1c/d it seems that the digital system did not record data between ca. Feb22 and Jul22. Do you mean that there is a discrepancy between data recorded prior to Feb22 and after Jul22? In any case, it would be interesting to read what the reason was for the gap in data from the digital system, since this could shed some light on operational differences between the two systems."

We mention here that more data would make it easier to understand the greater discrepancies in 2022. We now have data until 12.03.2023 and would like to suggest showing it in the paper (see for example new Figure 1c below), as it is particularly interesting. Our interpretation: 

The discrepancies between the two sensor systems are highest during the summer 2022 heat wave and diminish again afterwards. They are even high at 20 m depth, during a period when the thermal effects of the heat wave cannot yet have an effect at depth due to the thermal lag and delay with increasing depth. 

As air and near-surface temperatures were much higher than in Summer 2022 than during the previous two summers, we surmise that the differences may be related to the influencing factors presented in the Discussion (e.g. logger temperature, conductivity of measurement system). This is supported by the fact that the differences diminish again in autumn and winter 2022-2023

We would like to add the new data to the paper and make the appropriate adjustments in the figures and text (dates etc.). There are no major differences in our findings other than the observations mentioned above. 

"On line 86 there is a mention of some 'assumptions that are assumed to be approximately met'. If these assumptions are important for the method applied here, it would be good to state more clearly how or to which degree they are met."

We agree and would like to clarify by changing the text to: "For a stationary signal, a long convolution window and purely gaussian noise, the procedure results in the exact noise SD. The borehole temperatures change slowly and we assume the measurement noise to be of gaussian nature."

"From Fig 2b it seems that the delay in measurement dynamics are only present when the temperature sinks. If this is the case in general, it would be interesting to read how it could relate to the mentioned reasons, as well as to the self-heating of sensors that you mention in the conclusion."

The situation shown in Fig. 2b is not always the case. Sometimes the delay occurs whilst temperatures are rising (see the following example at the same depth, but one year earlier)

"36 – The slope with the borehole is referred to with the name of the peak"

This is true, but we don't quite understand why you mention it.

"Fig 1d – Typo in heading"

Thanks, will change to: Data availability

With kind regards,

Lars Widmer, Marcia Phillips and Chasper Buchli